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WRITER/DIRECTOR: Alicia R Norman

PRODUCER: LUV MULTIMEDIA

MUSIC: FREE STOCK MUSIC / Footage firm


A RUFF MIX of an upcoming SGL episode


Edicus gave the gift of Magick to human kind centuries ago, and like Prometheus, was punished for his crimes. Banished and believed to be long dead, a preggo abducted Isabella is more than a little surprised to find that her lead captor is none other than Dear Old Edicus himself.

As Edicus is something of a legend, i.e. rockstar, in the magical worlds, she is more than a little star struck in spite of being held against her will. Made helpless by Spheres that drain her of her pulse light energies, the very pregnant Issa is at Edicus mercy--but comes to find the ancient wizard's mind, humor and candor a bit--well--alluring...

But blames the pregnancy hormones, I mean, they worked on opposing teams-- and besides, Issa was madly in love baby daddy, Aaron--

How was she to know that Edicus returned her attraction in spite of her ever growing belly....

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BunnyLoca Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2012  Student General Artist
My critiques:
You must move the tip of the tongue more for the "t" "n" "d" and "L" sounds. You can get away with any other sounds by moving the mouth up and down( Excepting the "u" and "oo" sound)
The mouth movements are too exaggerated for my taste.
The male's voice either has to be faster or has to be softer with more moans to have the right feel to it.
The woman's could be louder ans more panicked when she says "No!" (but that's just my ocd)
I don't know if it was because of the exporting, but the in changing scenes/positions everything stretches then compresses. I don't like that much movement.
The character design is so... HOT. I would volunteer to take that girl's place any day! Or take the guy's place ;) lol. Great job adding detail to the nipple and eyes! They look like they where made by (insert good videogame companies name here).
This is the 2ed video I've watched of yours. I'm looking forward to learn more about the story of theses guys!
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HeartOfDeath Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2012  Professional Filmographer
hey thanks so much for such a detailed critique--I am honored as it shows a real care for the story and characters--thank you!!!! *hugs*
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BunnyLoca Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2012  Student General Artist
:iconblushplz: I'm so glad I can help <3 I can't wait to see the next one!
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HeartOfDeath Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2012  Professional Filmographer
well--once I get past my kidney infection I plan to plow through--lol
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BunnyLoca Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2012  Student General Artist
Oh... shit... get better. NOW!
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HeartOfDeath Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2012  Professional Filmographer
I know right--damn kidneys--who needs 'em...wait a minute....lol
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BunnyLoca Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012  Student General Artist
Man it would be so awesome to noot need kidneys! We wouldn't have too pee all the time!
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HeartOfDeath Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012  Professional Filmographer
ROFLMAO--but where would the wee wee go?
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zededd Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2012  Student Digital Artist
@01:37very nice work! love the deformation on the clothes. those dynamic? i suppose you're using poser, right?
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HeartOfDeath Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2012  Professional Filmographer
@01:37and thank you
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